Being Fair with Computers

We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
• An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
• Reasons for our opinion,
• An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. In my opinion kids should have a button in the wall and when they press it a computer flows down and the kid can use it. Kids would not have to go to the table and they would not disturb their mother. Builders should build a computer hatch and electricians should put control pads in the wall.